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DiamondswayDiamondswayabout 4 years ago
nice work

Most enjoyable story in a long time. Nice work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Need much more detailing the sex!

WretchedMonkeyWretchedMonkeyalmost 4 years ago
A lot of glossing over here.

3 recently ex-virgins playing with lots of toys and it went pretty far pretty fast. These are girls that from what I gathered didn't have sex toys (at least not out of the packet) and hadn't had many orgasms, if at all. Then they're faced with strap-on dildo's, double-enders and one of the girls first experience of anal (being that here first vaginal was very recently as well) but she opted for double penetration? Why? It's like she's just learnt to swim and went from the shallow end of the pool to swimming the Atlantic in one step. And it's just over with in a few paragraphs, there's no real pay-off.

rockingtilidroprockingtilidrop9 months ago

Some parts of this were hot as fuck, would make for a great AVN

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