All Comments on 'Blizzard Ch. 21'

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UncleGraham almost 3 years ago

Okay, this is where I got bored. The story is not moving along anymore and the novelty has worn off. It started as a five, but has now reduced to three, and I'm gonna quit now.

AlexFourways 4 months ago

I reget that I agree with UncleGraham. I've lost the plot. When there is sex, it's confusing who is doing what to who. Pity, I had enjoyed the premise but I will have to skip to the end to see if I can work out what happened to who.

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