All Comments on 'Blondie's First Black Dick/a Rewrite'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Fantastic!

Absolutely loved the fantasy of her dancing naked in front of the black baby daddy with her swollen belly! Outstanding scene. Please continue and let the baby bump happen!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
“Note Book” xxx

Just stumbling on to this format, Read others but your writing is second to none, feelings of joy and love for your wife leads me to believe it has bn a wonderful journey to have loved her through!!!myself a husband considering allowing my own wife additional partners and evaluating cause and effect of keeping a much younger woman overly sexed and satisfied,where as in my prime I was drivin by my talents and desire and would never have considered sharing, but aging and still viral I have considered using Fantasy becomes reality and enjoying other men taking part in satisfying my wife with me ,, indulging ourselves in another way of making love to my wife!!! Thank you for the look into a hottt hott love story as personal as it may have bn

IFAFILHGIFAFILHGabout 3 years ago

Great story...finally an author that gets it correct...husband is present and involved so both enjoy the erotic pleasures...I will never understand why so many authors shut hubby out and wife fucks behind his back..get it right or just don't write...5 stars

LoisKnight69LoisKnight69over 2 years ago

Great line: "and with two more men sitting bedside, Blondie, unready for the sex to stop, was ready to pull a train."

Story does a good job of trying to explore the psyche of a cuckold husband. It mixes the voyeur feelings with conscious dark hesitant thoughts of wanting her impregnated - but not to term. The husband faces his fears that his wife will fall in love with Charles, a "regular lover". She minimized her feelings for the "regular", but still recognized and didn't deny her affection for him. Existence of those feelings contrasted nicely with the raw lust between her and the young black man, Tommy.

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