All Comments on 'Blood & Fire'

by JuanaSalsa

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A really well told story, you have the ability to write to a much wide audience.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Sssoooooo Gooood! More in this universe, please?

sirwoodcuttersirwoodcutterover 2 years ago

Great story. Thanks.

Sir GalahadSir Galahadover 2 years ago
Like the magical rules established, and their consistency

Good story, excellent establishment of how the magic works in that world. Character development could have been better; all were a little two-dimensional for my taste. And I'd have liked the sex to have better exposition. Not a bad read, but a good skeleton to build on, not a finished product. Keep writing!

amygdalaamygdalaover 2 years ago

This was really good. I like the world build and especially the characters. The penultimate ending was a bit lacking though and I wanted to see that horrible father get his just comeuppance.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Sorry that the limit is 5 stars; this deserves many more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

uhm, more please?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I rate few stories, and comment in fewer. The pressence of this comment is an idication that your words are enjoyable to the average reader. Well done and writen. Would like to see a follow up, even tho it is fine being left where it is

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Absolutely one of the best ever. Thanks.

shhquietshhquietover 2 years ago

This honestly is closer to a mass market fantasy than to a smutty story. Very good and the sex is more a part of the plot than the point of it.

69GodIsDead42069GodIsDead420over 2 years ago

This is some gourmet content. Definitely gonna read the rest of your stuff

SatyrDickSatyrDickalmost 2 years ago

Excellent story - could be an HBO series.

11/10!!!!!

WolfenherzWolfenherzover 1 year ago

Just a fantastic story, loved every part of it.

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