All Comments on 'Blood and Love Ch. 12'

by Eternalivan

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VampWriterVampWriterover 12 years ago
Amazing!

Loved this, but are we going to find out about Daniel & Aaron? Or did I miss something?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Vampire Diaries?

I know the music quotes are from the VD soundtrack, but I don't watch the show so is this one of the plots of it? Also, is this the last chapter? There are so many unanswered questions. Who was killing the girls? Evan's brother or Ruth or ? Will Aaron give Daniel a chance or is he hopelessly hung up on his ex? Does anyone else find out that they're vampires? It feels disappointing on many levels.

EternalivanEternalivanover 12 years agoAuthor
A note for all........ :)

Hey evryone,

@Anonymous...No, the plot will not from VDs.

.........

Thanks for liking the series so far. This is definitely NOT the end. I have a lot planned for the series. I would have extended the Sean-Evan separation for a few more chapters :P But decided against it cuz it's time I gave momentum to the plot. The story has just begun. Aaron-Daniel relationship is very important for the plot and needs evolution, So they cannot be together; at least for now. There's a LOT to be told. The next chapter will give you a great idea of what the plot will/may be. Also, I have loads of cliffhangers waiting for everyone. :P happy reading! :) Thank you again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

When a heart breaks is by dave barnes, those lines sound a lot cornier without the music so I had to find it! I love the series!

skuldsenseskuldsenseover 12 years ago
Deja vú...

This vaguely kinda reminds me of this story I read...:/ not a real one though... A fanmade story. Other than that...I enjoyed this chapter though I wish the sexual scene was a bit more :)

lacedaemonlacedaemonover 11 years ago
love the story

I know I am commenting a year late, but here goes...

I am really enjoying the story so far. There is love, suspense, misunderstood feelings, everything I like in a good read.

However, as others have also mentioned I would like a little more from the sex scene. It was okay but, for example, the consistent reference to "organ" kinda made it feel impersonal and so I didn't find the scene that erotic at all.

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