All Comments on 'Blood and Love Ch. 20'

There has to be more :( noooooo

PLEASE WRITE MORE

I am constantly distracted by your lack of editing. I can't help but wonder if perhaps English is your second language, because your story is often interrupted by odd tenses, incorrect use of simple words ("platonic" being a standout - I do not think this means what you think it means), and a lack of heat in your sex scenes. You really, really need an editor. Your thoughts have so much potential but the plot just won't come together if you don't polish it.

Where is the next chapter???? I was so into the story, i didn't want to stop but i had to cause you haven't posted the next chapter yet!! Please post it soon, I absolutely love this story!!!

are you going to finish it? i really hope you do!!

Hey. My apologies for the delay. Some inevitable circumstances and commitments have devoured my time. However, soon I'll be free to write. By the end of this month, the story will have been concluded. Thanks. :)

I think this is a retelling of the Twilight storyline isn't it? Don't get me wrong I am not knocking it.

I love this story and I have to know how it ends!!