All Comments on 'Blood & Metal'

So apart of a good lay (which he can find anywhere) what exactly does he get from this relationship? As I see it, she holds all the cards...blood and sex. But he??? nah.

Good writing style, it flows beautifully.

I agree that she, in fact, does hold a lot of the cards, but it's not as though she is in complete control. I mean, he has a VAMPIRE as a SUBMISSIVE. She didn't bite him until he said it was okay. And as far as him getting sex from just any woman, true, yet he didn' take home the woman that hit on him at the bar. Perhaps the image in my head didn't come across here, but if you'll bear with me and look for the next installment ;), maybe it'll work better next time....thanks for the feedback! it's always helpful.

Another well crafted story from Syri07. I'm not sure which was more erotic the sex or the blood letting. The writers use of language raises every encounter between Eve and Clay to the level of near orgasm.

MY GOD. beautifully done, and oh so sexy and classy

Sexily written vamp story...very demure!

wish you would come back

Really hot... sexiest tryst ever