All Comments on 'Blood for the Vampiress Ch. 01'

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BakedbeankidBakedbeankidover 17 years ago
Great Start

Wow

What an opening chapter. Cant wait for the next instalment

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
So far

The description is a little purple, but the plot is good. I really like the description of the firey-eyed woman as he first meets her.

sacksackover 17 years ago
You style is tough and very gritty....

and not all readers will respond. However, I did like this story despite the blood and guts details. Good luck in the contest!

kaantikaantiover 17 years ago
Great

I really like this, especially the blood. I am looking forward to reading more. More description would make something that already good even better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Interesting setup

but a bit sketchy. Hopefully, the details will fill in as the series progresses.

Selena_KittSelena_Kittover 17 years ago
Dramatic!

You have a flair for the dramatic! :) It's quite the horror scenario setup though, very fun!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wow X2

I will be going on to the next chapter! I hope they keep coming!

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