by 100 Angry Bananas
Wow
What an opening chapter. Cant wait for the next instalment
The description is a little purple, but the plot is good. I really like the description of the firey-eyed woman as he first meets her.
and not all readers will respond. However, I did like this story despite the blood and guts details. Good luck in the contest!
I really like this, especially the blood. I am looking forward to reading more. More description would make something that already good even better.
but a bit sketchy. Hopefully, the details will fill in as the series progresses.
You have a flair for the dramatic! :) It's quite the horror scenario setup though, very fun!