All Comments on 'Blood of Dragons - The Apprentice'

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ju8streadingju8streadingover 4 years ago

this story could have a lot of potential for a bunch more adventures.

TSreaderTSreaderover 4 years ago
A very good chapter!

Very well done! And I love the yummy parts too! Thank you!

Jackspeed2uJackspeed2uabout 4 years ago
Wow unexpectedly fantastic.

You know there is a series here if you wanted. 1 travelling to the new city. 2 getting set up in the academy and city watch. 3 training at academy for Paige and specialist combat training for Haley. 4 quests/missions with Paige as the boss and brains and Haley as the sexy muscle, maybe a few extra expendable team mates.

Yeah so then Paige and Haley could do missions to kill that bad sorcerer who doesn’t have a license ( Conan the Barbarian style) or go and collect/retrieve some object or artifice or person.

Anyway great standalone or continuing story.

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