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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I am sure that you put a lot of time and thought into this story, but I'm not going to read a 63 page story. If you had broken it into say 10 chapter, I would have tried to read it.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I read your first story about Jim. Good story, terrible writing, in need of editing.

I just read the first page of this story. It seems that you still do not have the editor. This is unfortunate. No way I could make it through 63 pages of such editing.

Please, find an editor.

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