All Comments on 'Blood Wrong'

will there be a part 2?

You better have some continuation for this, because as of now this isn't any incest or taboo at all, only a non-con story, and if it's finished as it is, no better than a 2 star at best.

You have garnered my interest and I look forward to reading the rest of the story.

Part 2 please

Terrific story -- it screams for a Part Two!

Good story so far. Please continue it.

I hope there is more.

I understand how Tom feels. I too have sister whom I bond with. I once almost killed a guy with a baseball bat for striking her. Good for you Tom.

Great start to this story. Can't wait for more.

This _is_ "Part 1," right??

5*****, so far.

Odd place for you to end the story, even if there are more parts to come. Other than that, good effort.

The story seems to be a flashback and the ending is rather odd for a chapter break. Hopefully there is more to come as it's a good start.

It's great - so far. Need the conclusion.

Can't wait to see the rest

No, not incest, but still considered taboo by many people.

Very well paced and good descriptions, without being over the top.

5* - looking forward to more.

Tc

Don’t leave us hanging!

This is fantastic. I am absolutely loving the whole thing. Bery well done

4 just because of the abrupt cut. Good story so far but annoying how it ends especially when the story is not listed as a chapter 1 or part 1 or anything.

4/5 because you failed to label this as Part 1. 5 of the 7 tags were not in this story. This is not an incest story but does have the makings of a good romance story.

What happened to the rest of the story??? I read this last week, and was trying to find it, because I thought it was so well written, wanted to read it again. Where did the rest of it go??

Why would you not finish this??? Especially, after Tom is arrested for beating Delbert really within an inch of his life??, and he's still touch and go in the hospital in Kansas City. They think an axe handle did it, but no one will find it as it burned up in the kitchen's wood stove. Richard watched it burn, and when the sheriff checked with the hardware store, the inventory list showed the same number of handles, that were out on the floor. Of course Richard and Tereasa verified that Tom was With Addy all night, so there was no problem with Tom's alibl. Delbert never really regained conscienceness before he died, such a same so the matter remained 'unsolved', and Delbert's family moved away. Please finish it. Your storyline is great. Keep writing.

XYZ

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It just stops at the 4th page???? Where is the rest???

This story was riveting. You did an excellent job of portraying their love for each other as it blossomed into desire. I loved the entire story. 5 stars