All Comments on 'Bloodbath'

There's a good story line buried in there, I think; probably; maybe. But there are so many writing blunders that it is almost impossible to read the story.

-- KK in Texas

and there are indeed parts of 6 or 7 stories put together randomly. You add details that mean nothing "M3 shotgun"

there are too many mistakes in grammer to try to guess what some parts were intended to say.

What the hell was that?

its funky

of course my grammar aint that great neither, i'd like to see it progress,