All Comments on 'Blossoming: New Beginnings'

Can't stop now, atleast a second part so I'll know if it works out..

Enjoyed it very much! I am looking forward to reading more!

I think she should go to her games and cheer her on, can't wait for the next part

Cannot wait for the next part of this one.... very nicely done. I love that the girls decided not to "go below the belt" the first time and actually build something. Well done!!

very nice keep going.

This has great promise of a Blossoming New Beginning and series. I have no major critique except watch your grammar syntax. It interrupts the flow of your story and as a reader, we're making corrections as we go. Other than that, I love it! I look forward to reading the next chapter.

Definitely great so far. I love the eroticism in the asking before touching, too.