All Comments on 'Blowjob Lessons'

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for some notes on the story. Glad I managed to get one out before Christmas, it's been some slow submissions for me of late.

As always, thanks for reading, rating, favouriting, commenting, etc.

-X

The characters are all believable, especially with the reluctance shown in the dialogue that results in acceptance. This is a good stand-alone story, but it could really use a sequel.

Read it without checking the author. Should have known it was a xarth. It was that damn good. But I need a follow up where either of the girls fuck the brother

I usually do not read stories this long but, I started it and could not stop. Amazing job!!

god this was hot as hell very well written. i cannot wait to read more.

Always look for new stories posted by you. This one was absolutely fantastic. Nice build up, great connection and feelings expressed from the sisters/brother. You really have a great talent for breathing life into all your stories and characters. Keep up the good work and thanks!

just another carpet gagging story. Ehhhhh, WRONG! Helluva story, with just the right buildup. Like a previous comment, I too detest long submissions, but you brought me to the Dark Side. Serena was more than a female with lesbian leanings, I was taking notes👍👍

Another home run man, just straight out-of-the-stadium!

Just one thing that didn't feel done "as well" was the interaction between the sisters and Drew (also kudos for the siblings Nancy & Drew): the strength of you stories come mainly, imo, from the building of a taboo interaction between the siblings involved. It was true with Serena and Nancy, but not with Nancy and Drew (not to mention Drew and Serena that felt like mere acquaintances).

I'd say you put this one out of the park. Even with 7 pages, I read it in one day. So many ways for this story to go....using the strapon on each other. Sex with their brother. Anal passages. Like I said, so many ways to go. I REALLY hope this story continues as it's the best story I have read in a very long time.

A little weird with the lesbian sisters but well written.

Great

Another great story - Many thanks for haring with us....

Absolutely love how you keep them seperate and have them all join in hesitantly and dont rush it, here’s to hoping for another chapter or two

I usually don’t like stories that long, but I hated when that ended.

Normally don't go for anal at all. Or deep throat. But dammit this is so hot. Really well-written... with natural, sweetly fun dialogue, and getting into Nancy's head (despite writing in the 3rd person) to share her feelings.

I gave you five stars, so this is not criticism. Just a suggestion on how you could hopefully, proceed with this great story. I hope you included Drew Drew so you can continue the story? As much as I enjoy reading about the sisters, we need some diversity in here and Drew has just the right equipment to provide it.

The last thing I’m gonna do is tell you how to write as you are obviously a master! All I want to say is I hope the sequel has more heterosexual in it.

Serious how many super hot stories can you write, but then leave hanging. This is anothrr story that desperately needs and deserves more chapters

You've spoiled me for the other writers I've encountered on this site. That will have to be our little secret. Keep it to yourself

Not as good as your other stuff, but it kept me reading.

Thanks for sharing... again!

Amazing. Thank you for another masterpiece.

I'm enjoyed this a lot. Just 2 questions, 1. Why didn't Drew stay around and go to their bedroom and watch Nancy and Serena making out if he liked it so much, and 2 will there be another chapter of this where they go a lot further, maybe a threesome can occur and the relationship becomes a three-way street with each sibling caring equally for the other two equally?

I agree with the comments by Maxsteele. I would love to see a second chapter where Nancy discovers that she develops feelings for her brother that are just as strong as her feelings for Serena. I want Nancy and Serena to both be in love with their brother. But that's just my opinion.

Best author

It's a great story.

You are truly a true master.

But I have my reservations. I feel that Nancy has not yet decided where the children are going. What is her way. Girls, boys or maybe a couple. The sister's squeeze is very strong. Although Serena is always saying that the choice is for Nancy, it's not true. She is selfish and loves only herself. She exploits her sister and brother.

There is a victim in this story. Drew.

He really loves his sisters.

I think he's more in love with Nancy than he admits. It's important for him to know what's going on behind the door of his sisters' room and not be a part of it. They used him as a condom and threw him in the trash can. He is self-sufficient. He is autonomous among the people he loves.

This is very bad.

If you come back to this story sometime, you might want to write it from Drew's person. Nancy's still not engaged. She's a virgin. That's my understanding. There was no penetration in the pivo by either dildo or penis. Drew must also be a virgin. Maybe Serena will see her brother's anguish and teach him as well. Drew's first sex with Nancy is great.

I believe you can describe it in an artistic way. Do it.

But in general, it's your choice.

Thank you.

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There is no world championship of dildo swallowing. (Shades of Deep Throat/clit in throat). Blowjob = dick sucked. We get 5+ pages of lesbian sissex before the one token dick-sucking, cum-swallowing BLOWJOB. Second (and last) of this author's stories I wasted time on.

A nice and unusual angle to the relationship of the sisters. Be interesting to see how the dynamic of this develops.

wow good stuff im as hard as a rock and playing with my nipples

Super hot. There's a great dynamic here with Nancy as the innocent wanting to learn and Serena being older & more experienced, but still discovering things as well; the two of them falling in love and growing in their sexuality together. I would really like to see this become a series; Nancy & Serena moving forward as a tight-knit couple, exploring new areas of sex together. Easy starting with Serena teaching Nancy cunnilingus, then both of them moving on to other things together like different toys, butt stuff, and maybe some of the light bondage Serena mentioned in this story. As they get older and move out of their parents' house, the sky's the limit.

Drew was annoying

What a well don interwoven tale of sibling love. My hat’s off to the author who could imagine this scenario & express it so perfectly. Well done! A solid 5 stars & there should be a higher rating available.

Bill S.

Liked it but a little long with the conversions and toying of Nance by Serena.

Perfect in every way! Thanks for sharing.

Excellent and would love to see a continuation of it with all three involved.