All Comments on 'Blue Collar Succubus'

I'm curious as to how this world with "working" succubi works. This story is just the tip of the iceberg.

This is a fascinating twist on an old topic, really enjoyed it. I hope you expand on it as I would love to know more, are they in Hell? if so what is the rest of it like? and what are they mining?

I read this tale a few days-couple of weeks ago and found enjoyment while following the thread. Not sure of what plans you have for continuing this to a closure point, but it would not hurt my feelings any. I'll have to go back a reread it for any kind of suggestions... just know it has bothered me for not making a comment as well as voting. In addition to finding a measure enjoyment and distraction from daily life, the characters caught my fancy as well. Please lead us on our merry way.

Thanks everyone for the comments, rating as well as taking the time to read my story :) I will be following this up very soon now i have a firm idea of the next chapters content. This is my first ever story i have written so dont expect anything too award winning, i will be writing in a style i think will lead forward

Well you definitely have your writing skills down pat. I have no complaint at all about those. But you sure raised a lot of questions in my mind with this story. Hopefully you will do some back story before you continue on with this one. I'd like to read more

Interesting. I hope you continue with this. I'd like to know h what they are working on and how the men got hooked up with the 'girls'