All Comments on 'Blue Fire Ch. 01'

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Naiad_AerialNaiad_Aerialabout 5 years ago
Amazing

I love the beginning of your story and can't wait for the next chapter!

DreamDiverDreamDiverabout 5 years agoAuthor
Comments!

Thank you to person who commented looking forward to the next chapter. Please leave me comments, guys! I really need critique and criticism to improve! Thank you for reading!

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