All Comments on 'Blur'

Interesting first story.

0-60 in 0.2 seconds is a real bummer. Especially when they don't really even know each other.

The inextricably special link between two humans. More powerful than most might immagine.

Culmination had to come, joining them, as one.

Good story, could be great with a little more detail on most aspects.

My opinion to build up was a bit too quick and confusing, but everything else was great honestly.

I wanted to thank everyone for taking the time to comment on my work, no matter if it be positive or negative. It means so much to me. :)

I loved this story and it gave me inspiration for a mom/son story I'd gotten stuck on about how mom goes from being repulsed by the idea to beginning to accept her awakening feelings.

This could be a five star story if you fleshed it out with dialogue. Have the son ask why mom never contacted him. Have her respond she wrote letters, that kind of stuff, two or three more paragraphs before the sex and we have a really good story.

Very strong emotional story. Thank you, please continue your work.

It's good to see you back Toni! Great short story, well written as always.

My mom came1st time I nursed. Started our mutual infatuation.

Blur.....you should blur your profile picture too!!

It was a good read. I look forward to reading Toni's other stories.

Liked the story but it was lacking information you skipped over so much and it was too short still 4 stars!!!!!!!!!

Very nice story but it was to short and you needed to add more info gave it a 4