All Comments on 'Blurred Lines Pt. 01'

by BoringDude

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26thNCuck26thNCuckover 3 years ago
Amazing

26thNCuck approved

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Waall that there's a good excuse .....

'Sorry Dear as you know I can't really see much without my glasses

and I thought it was you that I fucked in the bathroom just now !!!!

🙄 🙄 🙄 🙄 🙄 🙄' .....

angelofaionangelofaionover 3 years ago

Oh je i See a pregnancy on the horizon

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 3 years ago

Don't write in present tense.

silentsoundsilentsoundover 3 years ago

Weird enough for me to be interested in where this is going.

Bizarre that they would have two people that looked a bit like them in the same bar.

I love a good train wreck and this looks to be the start of one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
no way out of that

Wow. I do feel sorry for her having to carry that guilt. I guess as a fantasy story it is possible. If he finds out it will affect him but I guess heh would have to treat it like a rape where she is innocent? Maybe not rape but it was not like she purposely cheated.

My issue with the story is that they didn't go home or try and buy some "cheater" glasses at the corner store. I know my wife would not want blurry vision and dizzy all night. That would make her sick. Also, knowing she was blind, he would wait outside the restroom door.

timrivtimrivover 3 years ago

A few weeks later she realizes she missed her period. Then finds out she’s pregnant.

What to do, she she pretend it’s her husbands? Get an abortion? Tell her husband. Try and find the father?

See chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nasty

And NOT in a good way. UGH!

1 star

Dittybopper6989Dittybopper6989over 3 years ago
Good job

Crazy but creative. It poses the question "what would you do if a hot lady comes on to you in a bar?" Thanks.

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
Last one

Your previous story was very good, but you let someone else finish it. This one ends with a wife cheating. Will you finish this one?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

You got your name right, was so bored by the end of the first paragraph I gave up, who gives a shit that the door got stuck?

kiteareskitearesover 3 years ago

IRL? Time to confess ASAP

In LW? Don't say a word, sit on it, pretend the off spring is his, until it all blows up 15 years later...

Nice bit of fun thanks

iameaseliameaselover 3 years ago

Ridiculously stupid.

Shes such a dumb ass of her husband ran her over with his car (after testing positive for an STD) the police would simply state he did the world a favor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
very good...

I forgot it wasn't going to not be Greg for a good while.

Of course, Plan B FOR SURE the next day. Case closed...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hard to credit

that she didn't check the voice...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
If her husband is that plain and average then what difference does it make who knocked her up?

Velveeta cheese parents beget Velveeta cheese children.

Actually it was a very contrived and juvenile plot. To explain all the reasons why a wife of some years probably knows whether or not she's fucking her husband, even with her eyes closed, would accept the presumption that such a mix up is conceivable.

Childish and silly. Hope your middle school friends enjoyed it.

Thanks for the effort.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Well... that happened

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Stupid bitch couldn't tell the guy wasn't her husband? If she was that blind, how did she find a bathroom? I don't buy that bullshit and sounds like she could be a slut. Better take a morning after pill...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Time for the morning after pill--quickly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Remember back a few decades ago in the big happening clubs of the city with coed bathrooms . So many married moms now think back at what a whore pig some guy was lucky to use . Many dicks sucked and girls fucking every time in the bathrooms and in various spots of the club. I remember two came back to where we were staying. They were from conn., two best friends one married and the other was getting married in two months. There cheating asses were fucked every way possible until the next afternoon. Two of my friends continued to hook up with them and even went to the wedding. Poor hubby’s married two friends who were never faithful from day one . Also yes they both got with them that night believe it or not the bride had two different strangers loads in her . One down her throat and the other up her ass. How sweet of her to keep her whore pussy fresh for her husband on there wedding night

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Lighten up people its just a story. Not a true story. Get over it.

@sbrooks103x, Oh yes sir mr brooks oh yes sir mr brooks anything you say mr brooks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
It wasn’t boring

It was plain stupid

GrendelpuppyGrendelpuppyabout 1 year ago

I gave it five stars.

A darkly lit bar combined with a woman with serious vision issues is a plausible scenario for mistaken identity.

I wish you had given my story a chance.

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