All Comments on 'Boardroom Bitch Ch. 01'

The best mom/son story I have read in a very long time...

gotta see how this turns out

I can't wait. What a fabulous story. Thank you!!!!!

what a hot sexy story. So well written it just flows into my mind with lovely images. I would love to read what Emily has been up to if it is incestuous. I really hope Vanessa and Vinny make twins boy & girl who follow the incest route too. Thnks for a great story and anxious for the next bit.

not too long i hope

What a great story. My mom was a real bitch like her as well - but the sexiest of all the moms in my youth. After my 18th birthday, while we were out of town and visiting a university I thought about attending in Texas, we fucked all night long in the hotel room we shared. That was the best sex I ever had. Vanessa and my mother were exactly the same. Exactly.

If I could give this more than 5 stars I would. GREAT STORY!

That ridiculous, nonstop string of words in italics made reading this thing impossible. It was like trying to drive down what should have been a smooth road, only to find that it was heavily strewn with irritating potholes. The effect on the continuity of the narrative was deadly, and each succeeding italic word made the whole text look more and more amateurish.

A great opening chapter! Well written and certainly very original! I'm really looking forward to reading more of this story! Thank you!

That was so wild and hot. I really enjoyed this and can't wait for the next part. I will say I'm not a fan of mom's fucking everything in sight and I thought there might be a bit more resentment from Vincent for how she treated him his entire life.

no 5's in my world, but you got 4. That's as high as I go. Great job!

I don't usually take the efforts to comment in writing but this time I felt compelled to.

This is so far the best written, well composed and equally well balanced story.

AMAZING job ... eagerly waiting for many more sequels.

I normally avoid ten page long stories, but this time I felt compelled to read on and I’m glad that I did

Well, I’m hooked. A damn great tale, and after ten pages I only wanted more! Can’t wait for chapter 2 (but I will!)

YES:

He stood

She stood

They stood

OR:

He was standing

She was standing

They were standing

NO:

He was stood

She was stood

They were stood

Otherwise a really good story .... so far.

please continue

And well written too. Please, please, please write Chapter 2.v

You have outdone yourself and I will be patiently waiting for Chapter 2

Google 'jding xhamster', click on the first link, click on the profile name 'jding' below the video, you will see 7 mother son pissing videos, enjoy. Will share more if you like. Please write more mother son Piss drinking stories and try to include, smelling pussy, Pissing in glass, drinking each others piss and spit, Piss cum cocktail, public Piss drinking(park), sister catching mom Pissing in son's mouth(but shouldn't join them, guilty mom & son facing sister scene will be hot). And try to avoid three some, group sex, swapping, sharing, pissing in bathroom. Doing it in kitchen, hall or bedroom will make it hot. A nasty mom son romantic story, that's what literotica missing

Please write more mom son piss drinking stories, try to add more drinking each others from the saurce, drinking each other from glass & piss-cum-spit cocktail scenes. And try to avoid lesbian, threesom, group, sharing, sleep around scenes. I have a few real mother son video links(includes 3 piss sluts) and some nasty piss/squirt(ff,fm,ffmmm) drinking videos. if you like, i will share.

Hope you have seen it, if not enjoy. google "Sasha Cane and Cate Harrington lesbian piss fest - spit swapping, brunette, masturbating, fetish pee, british" click on the Porntrex link(HD) or tube8 link, don't skip, watch the entire video, there is a very hot piss drinking scene in it.

Waiting for your mom son stories, Thanks

Cannot wait for Emily's return and her prospective. Is Charlie still alive? Will Chris found out and meet his real father? We all want to know. Great story. Putting on my watch list.

I am only on page three but I don't know if I'll make it any further. You should try reading this story out loud, making sure to put emphasis on all your italics as you speak. Then you'll realize how much you've abused the use of italics. It's like Chandler Bing all up in here, which is incredibly distracting and not at all sexy. At one point you even had an italic at the end of one sentence, and then had another italic maybe two words in the next sentence. Nobody talks like that, and nobody should have to read like that, either!

Disappointing, as I've read some of your other stories where you did *not* abuse italics, and you seem to be a decent writer.

How I've been waiting for Chapter 02

But it never comes

Whyyyy

What the heck??

Great story, still waiting on chapter 2

I think we've waited long enough lol

Ok, since I get a lot of comments and feedback regarding this story, I feel I should clarify things a little. I originally intended this to be a standalone one-off story. Then, when I got to the end, I threw in the twist with Emily's return, setting up a potential sequel. A sequel I had never originally intended to write. This was a bit of a rookie error on my part, which I regret. I have some vague ideas about a possible part two, but only very vague. I hope one day I will get round to it, but I think a lot of people should reconcile themselves to the fact that a) there may never be a sequel or b) if there is, it won't be for a long time.

At the moment I’m struggling to write any new material, let alone a continuation of this story. Apologies if this is not the news you're looking for.

Loved it! It's been 2 yrs how's the sequel coming? ....hello ......???

Next chapter asap

[26.07.22]

Mucho Caliente!

11/10!!!!!

great read, top notch

Not a dull moment in this story! Great friggin read! 5+🌟..The next chapter is gonna be off the charts! Can't wait!

I loved the way the story evolved when she Jap Slapped him around when he was whining about her missing his [faggy] play. Only disappointment was that they didn't somehow get Alice or Laura involved with them. Oh yeah; a baby? Give me a break

I'm praying every day hoping that you are working on sequel. It has tonnes of potential. Please bring it out. Thank you for another amazing story. This was my 5th re-read. ❤️