by rckplsky
story was well excecuted but the slip of "stacy" for Cindy disrupts the entire flow of the ending...
"It was six or 1600 in military time when Seaman Recruit Alexis Lundz returned from PT."
Military time adds 12 hours to whatever time in the pm it is, therefore 6 pm would be 1800.
"They didn't exchange many words after that. Stacy led Alex to the shower and they finally had that shower that they wanted. " Who is Stacy?
... Six o'clock is 0600 (am) or 1800 (pm) in military time, not 1600. Lol