All Comments on 'Bob Stephenson's Torture machine'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

I wouldn't begin to know what rating to give this. It took a bit of translating to understand. What I really need to know is what color was the little pill you took before you had this dream?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Bloody Hilarious!

Superb,laughed all the way through it.More please!!!!!!!!!

21stcv21stcvalmost 11 years ago
you got the accents right

brilliant one of the funniest stories I have read for a long time, I guess you worked in engineering?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Quite possibly the most hilarious and wonderful thing I have ever read, and despite the subject matter, nothing like I ever expected to see on Literotica! Sincere compliment, but this is one of the best worldbuildings ever, the attention to the the little things, the language! And of course the big things!

I am now in a dilemma of wanting to show this story to a great many ppl, except... it's on Literotica, lol.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Super

Gave me a reet good laugh!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Terrible.

The worst writing I have read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Screwed up story.

I doubt you could even write in real English, much less this fooked up dialect you invented.

What is a "double acter"

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