by wajawhiii
I found one hiccup in this storyline that somehow was washed over.
Carol expressed love in such way to Bob that was more than sex love and yet, almost overnight she is bonking anything that moves. Obviously her depth of love for Bob was not as deep as she inferred. This was never revisited or discussed.
Very hot and unlike Anonymous below, I'd love to meet them all. I would however, encourage the men to overcome that barrier and play with each other as well.
Hot story. I see obsession developing in Mary as expected in atleast a few who click well.
Character development was non existent and the plot line buildup was far too rapid for the first day on the island - Segue is not your long suit -