All Comments on 'Bobbi's First Time'

Nicely written! The story flows smoothly. I liked the progression and, especially, the surprise interruption and phone call ending!

Dont leave me hanging.

God story i jaked off lyke twenttti tyms

Bravo my dear man Bravo!! It was well written,the story was well outlined and explained, you didn't rush into the next verse or climax,it was timed perfectly to intrigue the reader to continue until the end WELL DONE!

Thank you for taking the time to write and share this story here. I can't wait to read more of your contributions in the future. We need all of the high quality writing we can get on Literotica. I believe you have the potential to become a favorite author of mine!

I love first time stories, but what I love about this is that it was told not from the virgin's perspective but from the "taker's" perspective - and it seemed fairly plausible. Realism coupled with unbelievably hot sex scenes leaves me wet and wanting... exactly what I want from a story!

Thank you for a touching and exciting story. I am in the midst of reading all of your work. Your writing is thought provoking and exciting. Thank you for sharing, and please keep posting.

Had feel he was going to get caught but nice cliff hanger. I can see another chapter here.