All Comments on 'Bobby and Helge Ch. 01'

by leBonhomme

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

"Hm-hmm! I'll tell you, never have before, but not before you do. I go all wet, when I do that."

Just what the hell does that mean? And all the smirking and chuckling was such a screaming out "I don't speak English!!!"

Grammatically, this is one of the worst stories I've ever seen on this site. Poorly written by a ham handed hack.

That being said, I found the premise rather delightful. In the hands of a NoTalentHack or CindyTV this could have been stellar.

LeBonhomme, people just don't smirk that often.

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