by AlexaDrake
Decent idea but horrible execution. Learn to describe better, learn to write dialogue - it doesn't have to be witty but it does have to be there to have some emotional reaction to the characters.
I enjoy my friends come around and I dress so my tits and ass show. I like watching their eyes light up. When my husband's friends come around I like showing off. I always leave my tits fall out and they like feeling them and doing other things.
Thanks for the feedback, although why does all the negative stuff come from anon writers lol. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for reading. For Connie if your back thanks for the pleasant images your post left *wink*.
Alexa
Very good story. I think most boys have had an older woman that they dreamed of seeing nude or nearly naked. These boys REALLY got their dream come true.