by kinkspeak
This is a good story of passionite lovemaking, that foretells of the lovemaking of longtime partners--
The ending is very sad though-----
I understand the idea of the story completely. I have been there with my lover and know the closeness of the moment! I also love a story with a twist for an ending...the unexpected.
wonderful story that speaks of deeper meanings...well done. Thoughtfully expressed. Thought provoking as well...
wow, wat a great story, a great idea, and wat an ending! your erotic writing is good without even really describing the main even but the ending puts u in another level.