All Comments on 'Body Language'

by Taverner

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AzPilotAzPilotalmost 14 years ago
I really liked this story and thought it was well written.

You created a good situation, described it very well and carried through on the path you set up to a good conclusion. Very well done and thanks for the entertainment.

Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptalmost 14 years ago
A very nice story

This story was very well written. The relationship between Allan and Karla was beautiful. Keep it up!

rgbowrgrgbowrgalmost 14 years ago
Amazing

Very sensuous and loving story

ansdguyansdguyalmost 14 years ago
Very sweet

I assume there will sequels. At least I hope so!

JLC20thMaineJLC20thMainealmost 14 years ago

Superb. Absolutely fantastic, sensual, heartfelt and warm. I rarely make any comments but this is written so well, I had to say something. Please continue.

sexmatesexmatealmost 14 years ago
Wow! What a gem!

Why this story doesn't have a red "H" by it I will never know!

This story was hot and well written! The premise and the way it was told was just superb!

Yes I would love a sequel! With the way this is written who wouldn't!

This was a very loving, sensual story

P.S. So will Allan have his vasectomy reversed, so they can start a family?

Thanks for writing!

manimal51manimal51almost 14 years ago
Sequel Please

Very good story but don't leave us hanging. What's next for these two...or maybe three?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
divorce?

don't remember seeing anything about a divorce swwms if she left with the little jerk he would want a divorce right away

i agree it needs more and krystal needs to get involved also

CindysBobCindysBobover 12 years ago
you are very good...

Just read this and your auntie story and have to say you are really talented. You're patient, have great pacing and your dialogue is the tits. Just so well done on every level. Thanks for taking the time to write some dick-hardening erotic.

Bob

OleguyOleguyabout 10 years ago
Not really impressed.

Not really impressed with red H as per Sexmate's comments but bigawd I was impressed with this story.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Excellent! So gentle, tender and loving.

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