All Comments on 'Body of Water Ch. 01'

you have me curious. What a fantastic start, so different to your other stories but wonderful none the less. I can't wait to see what the next chapter will reveal. Hopefully that will be soon ....

WoW Mugsy! That was so intense and so very different! I swear I could feel the heat coming off those two in buckets! I am so curious to find out what they actually are and what the water has to do with it. Fabulous start! :-)

i see my girls have commented already ;)

i have to agree with them, this is very intriguing and i definitely am curious for the rest of this story.

So interesting and wet lol. . Amazing start. I'm anxious to see where this story is going.

I'll read anything you post. Very different, but seems intriguing so far.

You're right different from your usual fair but I love it just the same. I can not wait to see what comes next. Please don't keep us in suspense too long.

Different venue, always well done. I think you could write commercials and I'd actually watch/read them - which thanks to electronic gadgetry I never do.

I'm SO THRILLED! This... This is amazing... I'm so... ridiculously astounded by the nature of this story. Continue. Please.

WOW! More please.

I'm with the others... I'll read anything you write. That said, this is pretty darn awesome, and it's a much better nonhuman story than all that overused vampire/werewolf stuff. I'll just join the ranks of those waiting for the next chapter!

Wow! I need more please.

Although this is different from your other stories I love it!!! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!!

I don't normally read this sort of story but as it is your work I thought I should try it.

Can't wait for more!

Sorry I'm late getting to it. Very nice and very different. Can't wait to see what else happens. :)

When's the next one coming!!!! I keep looking for the next chapter already lol. Please hurry.

on the other site and LOVED it. Not your usual but you did it so well. I am intrigued and eagerly awaiting more.

I love this and can't wait to see where you take it. Love your other stuff as well, but it's always fun to read something different and you are doing a great job. Keep it up!

That was seriously exciting. Can't wait for more.

Bahaha. I haven't even read it yet- I just wanted to say that you totally made my day by setting this in Calgary. I'm guessing you're a Flames fan?

Great start! The heroine seems like a tale filled with tall strangers and mysterious underwater adventures would do her just good!

I'm so glad I finally started this series. I first found you because of hockey, and read all of those stories. Even the one by PennLady. So when I finished the last series, I missed you so much I kept checking for updates. But there were none, and I finally decided to read this one. I could just kick my butt for waiting so long!! But better late than never. (:

I think I've read this story a million times but every time, every damn time it gets to me. Well this goes to all your stories. You're an amazing writer xo

You've hooked me. Great first chapter

Wonderfully different from other stories here.

Intriguing start!