by MSSD
For some reason, I've always wanted to try body painting. After reading this story, I know why. Great story.
this is what I look for in erotica- an unusual juxtaposition of characters, totally believable dialogue, not a single word placed wrong. Thank you, thank you!
Ye Gods, that was incredible. One of the best stories I've read so far. I could almost feel the brush Myself.
Thanks for the paint job..
Catie
Very sensual, very erotic from start to finish... very well written. Your main characters (a buff hung dude and a lithesome young teen) were the perfect choice for holding ones attention! I loved the ending! Will you do more?
This was sensual without being overt. I loved it from start to finish. I wish Matt were real, and I were eighteen. ;)
Thanks for the juice!
Saucy
Sensual and creative story. I could really visualize the last painting session on the beach and wished I had been on the receiving end of the paint-laden tip of that brush! How about another story set on a beach in SF!