All Comments on 'Bodyguard Ch. 02'

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ThroatykittenThroatykittenabout 6 years agoAuthor

Hi everyone. I'm having internet problems at the moment so I'm not sure when the next update will be. I truly apologize for this.

EroticLitKittyEroticLitKittyabout 6 years ago
Well!

Looking forward to more from these two 👌

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Getting better

Better than ch1 it flows more evenly

Now you need a plot beyond the sex

So wolf witch thing has to develop

djb

TJSkywindTJSkywindabout 6 years ago
Much better

Well done.

FWIW, though, I'm personally not a big fan of switching perspectives as I have to keep shifting gears on who the person is; I feel it breaks the story's momentum. That said, this was good and let's see how you do. Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Superb!

I love it and I'm very happy you've posted these this year. Please post as soon as possible. I wish we could be notified when your chapters get posted like YouTube. I'll be on the look out. Forever yours - if you'll have me! A new Fan😉

ThroatykittenThroatykittenalmost 6 years agoAuthor

Okay guys, I've been procrastinating this decision for a while but...I'll be taking a hiatus. I wish I would've known everything that's happening right now was going to happen before I started publishing to Literotica.

There have been multiple deaths in my family for which I have traveled back and forth. My new job has been busier than ever due to staffing complications, so I get off late and must go in early. There's just been a lot happening since this year begun. So I'll be taking an undetermined amount of time away to get things back together and eventually have decent stories for you guys to read. I felt you all were owed an explanation for what's going on after you've all been so supportive of my stories. I may or may NOT drop short, no plot, steamy stories when I have a little time, but I will not continue Bodyguard until I have the time to properly analyze the plot for where the story is going so chapters flow better than they have and everything makes more sense(this will still be fantasy, so there will be no real origin to the type of creatures/characters. Just different things that I like from the fantasy community with my own spin on it and probably some additions.) I've been thinking as I go so far and right now that's too much to handle. Again, I thank you guys for your patience and support. I really hope you understand.

Love,

Throatykitten.

P.S. I may rewrite the first two chapters of Bodyguard, so if you notice they are gone, that's why. Also, please excuse any typos in this message as I am typing this while packing for one of those trips I mentioned I have to take.

XOXOXO

loverofmenloverofmenover 4 years ago
please come back

i love where this story is going. please come back

StrixalucoStrixalucoabout 2 years ago

So sad to hear the reason why this story is on hold. I really hope your life has had a better turn since.

These first 2 chapters are promising, but feeling a bit like in the air, especially considering her and all the surroundings. Werewolves are a bit easier, there are more things we are able to just assume and get it quite right.

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