by HeyAll
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As always, thanks to the readers for reading this. I hope you've all enjoyed this story.
Heyall
The ending feels a little rushed to me, but your portrayal of Jacob's increasingly dominant attitude and the mother's awakening submissive side was very nicely done. And sexy!
Great work, love the concept. If I were to have a suggestion, it just felt a bit rushed; it went from zero to sixty pretty fast in my opinion. As another person (sort of) suggested, drawing it out a bit more would have heightened the story. But, like most of your work, it was much enjoyed and much appreciated.
Since Jacob now knows their secret shouldn't he see if Aunt Christina reacts the same as his mother Maggie. What if when Maggie returns from her deployment Christina has been living with Jacob while she has been gone. If she is as submissive as her sister Maggie may find that Jacob's dominant side is something he truly enjoys. And he may want to continue their relationship too.
As far as the bondage side of things go I found it tame, but any harder and it would have to be posted in a different category, having said that as it was her son's first time he would most likely air on the side or caution anyway.
Possible plot line for a sequel: Aunt Christina seduced Jacob a year ago and he already knew about her relationship with his mother, so when he received the e-mail from his mother he immediately forwarded it to his aunt, and together they plotted the days events, knowing that Maggie would need to "test the waters", then we pick up where this left off
Anywho another 5 star story, thank you
So don’t worry about that. Contrived is fine as long as the story is also fun and sexy.
Absolutely fantastic story! One of the best I've read on here. Very devious way of getting mother-son into the scene together. Love light to moderate bondage; fact that mother was enjoying it and wanted it to be the way to get her son to screw her was terrific.
"lusted" should just have been "lust"
Yet again another great HeyAll story. Keep up with the wonderful stories.
The best stories make you think it it could realy happen just as described, and this was exactly that. Wonderful!
My favorite kinda smut. Three pages. A believable premise, but not too obsessed with the setup, buttoned up with a satisfying conclusion. That's what I love about a good HeyAll story. Get in, get off and get out. It's a beautiful thing <3
not sure i could do this with my mum but made me hard thinking about it
I have a girl friend, 34 years my junior, who needs to do this with her aunt and uncle, whom she lives with. She has refused so far, but is softening a little. Has a great body, huge tits any guy would like, a super ass, but enormous fear. Has to get over it somehow. Perfectly reasonable story!
nice concept. Crisp action...hot! Wish the Mom hadn't "wanted it" at the onset...just something she'd seen get out of hand...then have him break her totally. You write very well.
I agree with Cindy, I wish she didn't want it at first, and resisted, having her body betray her, as her son broke her will
I gave it a 5 star is because theres no way to give it 10! GREAT
and this was an actually a SERE practice exercise, Jacob could have fucked Maggie until sundown and she wouldn't have given up any information.
This was a perfect opportunity to enter Christina from behind.
I love idea of submission mother to sex slave. Love a mother whi wants fuck and give to her son, tease him with her dirty panties and show off at home. Love a cuckold father and a bi mother too. More please!
Why finish it up, plenty of room for a threesome,,he could fuck the aunty while she licked his mother
I really liked the set-up, and the build-up. The sexual tension more than made up for some softball interrogation, and the sex itself knocked the story out of the park. Really liked it.
But wait. She didn't pass the interrogation. She spilled the beans. Oh, well. More training. ;-)
As a retired USAF guy, I found this story to be very hot, very well written.