by totallyatease
I'm enjoying reading your story :) I got excited thinking one of the visitors might be her boss!! Can't wait for more.
So enjoying this story so far! but I am slightly confused about the girls, they aren't were, but they are feeling the affects of the moon? back-story please!!! Other than that I can't wait to see what happens next!!
A reader. As I understand it, anyone in the family Must be a changeling, if they've made babies with one. The only thing about the two girls is, out of respect and love for his departed wife, and maybe a bit of overprotectiveness, their father has raised them more human than were. They don't change as often, since its not as powerful a need or something completely involuntary as other stories. Since they don't change as often, their were self isn't as strong, or as comfortable with other weres.
This is one of the most well-written stories I've read. Deeply appreciative of the good grammar but I do wish there was more to each chapter. Can't wait to read more!
Things are heating up, I'm enjoying this very much. I'm looking forward to finding out what they turn into.
I also liked this: "her eyes widened with distress and the smell of her fear, doused his passion before it could even stir." I liked the fact that her distress was a turnoff for him. It makes me think this is going to be a good story with relatable characters.