All Comments on 'Bonding with Big Sis'

I'll punctuate a bit of your work:

"My sister was on her back legs, spread, 2 knuckles deep in her pussy."

Were the knuckles on her back legs or front legs? Maybe her middle legs if she had six! It does make a difference from what you wrote and probably meant.

I don't hand out 5 stars that often, but this definitely earned one. Hot, with a great plot, and an interesting story.

I definitely Agree with the other comment. I don't give out 5 often, however the Length combined with the intensity of the story, I loved it!

Thanks for the positive comment. This is my second submission so I really appreciate the feedback. And thanks again, glad you loved it.

The tease was just right for a short story. I'm sure that Anonymous 1 exploded in giddy orgasm at the punctuation error! Lol

Rare is the story where raw passion is stronger than lust. Where playful intimacy champions over love. Because more common writers on this site understand anything but the radical singularity of either spectrum. I would have loved a build up plot, but for the small details despite swift action. Bravo

No need to get all wordy with this beauty, one word will do it:

EXCELLENT !