All Comments on 'Bonds Unbroken Ch. 05'

So good. I feel so awful for Natham and all he's been through. Velaku is living up to his potential and his role as leader and it's good to see. The most well written of the chapters thus far, as well.

I dont read nonhuman stories here at this site but I like this one keep up the good work.

That was... just wow. Scary, sad, emotional, painful... and still not of trouble. LOL, I have to say I have loved every second of this series!

HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE, YOU *&$%&*^*&%%!?!

Nice work, by the way.

First, I love the story. Poor Natham. He deserves some peace and joy. How long has he been tortured for? I know that Val had the dreams since he was a child...was the torture this extreme always? It's a wonder he's alive. I hope you'll answer some questions and give us info I think is important for us to have. Tell us about the mating. What has to be done to complete it? If it is just exchanging blood then shouldn't they do it to have as much strength and whatever connection they can have to get out of this? Please tell us if mates have any psychic connection or feel each other's emotions so we know in what ways they are unique. I feel bad for Val when Natham says 'you've said that before'. He's right but that must have been hell for him to hear. I also want to know if Valaku has any extra powers. His eyes turning red isn't normal right? I guess the one thing is, he was so untrained so just watch not to make him unrealistically able to fight these trained carthera. I know they did those exercises, but you did say he was untrained in using his claws and wings and stuff. Can't wait for more

I guess "nasty" can be intriguing.... sometimes. Excellent work!

My thoughts for revenge mirrored those of Velaku. Bravo for the raw emotion you were able to elicit from both your characters and me.

sooooo, natham’s father is a different type of cat, is that why he doesn’t like him? is natham more like is mother? is she still alive? if she isn’t is natham paying for her ‘sins’? was natham raped?

part of me is feeling impatient and needing answers. but will wait quietly, *grinding teeth* as next instalment, am sure, is just around the corner.

thanks for another brilliant chapter ;0)

I'm loving this series. So much raw emotion, so much talent... I'm completely head-over-heels in love with this series, and Velaku and Natham. I can hardly wait for the next installment.

Thanks so much everyone who has been following Bonds and commenting! I really love getting feedback and comments. I have posted the next, and final, chapter to this story. Just a few days to wait!!