All Comments on 'Bonus'

"With a sigh, she got to her feet and brushed her shorts clean of the sand. With another sigh, she turned and walked home" not to mention the 2 1/2 or so feet of hair that would have been laying in the same sand dirt and grime. Anything beyond butt length is just in the way and in everything you get near.

I’m not sure how you do it? There’s all these people in your stories, and at first it’s hard to understand who they are.

You do it all backwards! You introduce the names and then you develop the characters. It’s totally backwards, and it works.

I read your stories and I’m thinking you are just about as crazy as Claude in this story, but it works. Do me a favor, keep being crazy! You are showing me a totally different way to develop a story.

I have a log in, but can’t remember it. So please accept this as coming from RBR.

Damn right, to leave that vette in an airport parking lot overnight!

Had a girlfriend years ago who wore pantyhose, God I hate pantyhose. She solved the dilemma of quickies with pantyhose, first no panties, second cut the crotch out of said pantyhose. When they all wore out she switched to thigh highs or garter belts with the short skirts and stilettos. Problem solved. Here we have a young, beautiful woman who goes down at the drop of a hat and swallows. She has never been eaten, fucks like a bunny and demands that he drill her ass. Wow! Any woman that tries to make a move on her man is going to be lucky to escape with her eyeballs still in her head. This little bayou girl has more class than Inga can ever even dream about, I don't expect we'll be reading about Sue Lynn stepping out on Claude. Another fine job, when I run out of LW's I going to have to start on the other genres. Signed: BTW

Love this story. Evil cheating whore wife Inga loses. Sue Lynn, Claude,and Charlie all win. The dialect is half the fun.

Good story enjoyed

Dialects not my forte

But enjoy others writing

For whatever reason though... even though this story was really kind of short and the courtship forced... they will make it. There is an innocence there.

Honestly I think this is one of you better stories

It murders conjunctions! MURDER, I tell you! Luckily, you're a better writer than TheMarlboroMan, who seels allergic to editing.

Love your stories, even third of forth time thru. Even more, love your comments:

"Yours...the car's...the wife's top " LOL. /s/ Just Jay..[Thanks for answering my E-Mail, years ago re: Acquisition from Dancing...]

I BELIEVE LOVE IS FOUND ALMOST ANYWHERE AND WITH ANYONE. YOU CAN'T CONTROL CERTAIN OCCURANCES IN LIFE. THIS STORY IS A JOY TO READ EVEN IF IT IS ONLY FICTION AND A STRETCH OF THE IMAGINATION. 5*****

Your attempt to project a German/Polish accent was off putting, it slowed me down alittle, vunce naw (PA Dutch).

Very interesting story. I'm still contemplating Inga's complete transformation. Also, why was Claude an apparent genius savant?

Best one yet.

But, dude, just say "Claude has a German accent". It's far easier for the reader to imagine him with an accent, than to lumber through reading it. It's distracting.

Overall though, this was another great read. Thanks.

I really wish there was more of this story in follow up chapters.

Would have been a much better story without forcing in the coal burning .

Still give it four stars

This is one of the best stories I’ve read in a very long time. I always try to read Jimbob44 stories. I always love the special artistic character development with your accents and slang that you put into your writing that draws me into your storylines. This one is excellent and way above many other stories.

Thank You for your true sense of reality, it’s always a five star read.

Artmanafw

Very interesting story. Joy to read. I'm giving you four 🌟✨🌟💫🌟✨🌟

And enjoy it, I did. Thank you

chur m8 awsum story

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Why are two people from Germany talking to each other in comically accented English rather than their native language? Might work for a joke, not for a story.

I have enjoyed your stories very much. I really liked the bitch losing everything.

5***** . It was another good tale, not as good as Tuff as Nails, but a good read . Thanks for writing these tales and sharing with us.

Munchie184

Thanks for letting enjoy your efforts

You wrote for your pleasure, and for, absolutely my pleasure. Along with the worlds pleasure. Made me smile at the end of this 80 year old retired Army sergeant. Well done.

Good style, good plot, no wasted words just an excellent read!!

I loved this story!! Great job. With Viagra, Claude will have years of great sex with her!!!

Enjoyed the tale, second time through. I've had a couple hot girls since my divorce (twenty years ago) and my Vette is a bit newer - 1974. Thank you for your stories! One thing I will never do is abuse a writer - as a long time reader I could never do that and have NO use for someone who does.

somewhere east of Omaha

He's got himself a candy store there but he'd better be damn good at eating pussy because that little 18yr cajun chick will wear his cock down to a stump in short order. hell she'd kill me on a one nighter.

Love the story, give it a five ......

Really good story, fast paced, several unique names but was fairly easy to keep track of everyone. Creative, you had me reading it with a German accent at times. Fun story and in the future i plan to read it several more times. thank you for a good read and well proof read, Thank you for that also.

Really enjoyed it. Cheers

Made me smile also. Story flow despite the knee jerk action. If nothing else Inga the selfish bitch got just what she deserved. Why Jerry is with her is still a bit of a mystery to me. She is self-absorbed and doesn't swallow or like anal. If he is worth a crap he should be able to get a better slut for a fuck toy. Especially since she isn't financially well off. BTRH…

Maybe should have been in the June-December category, but it is a great story and does fit the LW side too. Love Sue Lynn, and I can relate to Claude. Maybe a follow-up with their new child (daughter?) learning to play with magnets and dump truck with her older brother.

Fantastic.. you are my favourite writer on here !

Thank you

I read this story about 4 months ago and have been looking for it since. Great story and well told. I wish it were longer.

One of the best stories to grace these pages!

Within the top 5 stories I've read here. Ja, is very good.

Sue Lyn is typical American trailer park TRASH

Claude was so pussy whipped by a teen that he did not act straight away when Charles wasn't with Inga who was out with her boyfriend!! SUE LYN IS TRAILER PARK YRASH

Thanks for sharing you story with us, I really enjoyed it. I like most of the characters you write about, but for some reason I particularly like Claude Ivernek and hope to see him featured in some future stories. Again, thank you for sharing your stories with us.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

What a bunch of prejudice asses around here, because someone is raised in a trailer park, they have no morals and are worthless? I've found that those raised of basic needs have the best morals and are some of the kindest souls on the face of the earth. They get judged wrongly, it's not like they are left-handed and have no souls. Just being a Ginger means you are actually a soul stealer, what the hell people, GROW UP. judge not lest ye be judged. You write well and I enjoyed this totally.

Love it. Thank you

Might be a good story. Stoped 1/4 through too confusing to follow.

I love the way weave characters from your stories together,, making a map for us to find more stories with them... and do it well !

Another "5".

EastCoaster

I love a Cajun writing a German accent, I love that you share your imagination with us! Truly look forward to every story! 5 stars!

My only, only complaint about any of your stories is that I wish they were longer!

You are an amazing writer and you have a true gift for bringing your characters to life.

It’s shitty people leave you hateful comments. You write really good stories and iam sure Iam not the only one that enjoys them. I hope you do read this one.

I thoroughly enjoy your stories.

By mistake I pressed one star when I meant to press five, as I commonly do for this author’s great stories. Mea maxima culpa.

I’ll give it a 5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

It's my pleasure too

Entertaining, fun, and joyful.

I enjoyed your story, keep writing

cute

Great story telling talent...

5 no way around that. This was fun

I'd tell you how much I like this story, but I don't think you'd care

Very fun story. You always produce an entertaining yarn. 5/5

I love your writing style. Just ignore the haters, the grammar fact checkers, and the wanna be English majors. Write for your pleasure. Write because you have a story to tell. Write for my reading pleasure. Thanks

WONDERFUL STORY. 10 STARS! Sue Lynn Captivated Claude's, then Charles, heart. Eventually, he will call her mommy, and she introduce him as our boy Charlie. When she gives Claude another baby, she'll be the mother of 2 or 3, if she bears twins...

Always a favorite. Thanks.

Inga was a malicious bitch.

Loved the story. Fun to read.

I have a story for you.

Think of a LW story where a reader threatens you and your wife as an anonymous commenter. You find out he is married and you and your wife plot (but us the readers don't know). You take everything from him and his wife leaves him. At this point we find out you and your wife planned it all out.

Or not lol, love the stories.

Read this'un some time back, loved it then and love it again. I can go for the Vette but I'll have to take a pass on the young blonde, there is just no way I could keep up with that - even my tongue would fail me!

"Her, that car, and a cold glass of water would give him a heart attack, huh?" ...American vernacular poetry.

I am sorry that these other fools cannot tell a great story when they read one. I, on the other hand do like your stories. Please keep writing.

Fun read and very clever story!

There really are some weird comments. It appears some readers, can't stand it, that others actually have an opinion. Because it doesn't agree with them, they bitch, moan and groan about it. Get a life. This is a porn site.

I liked it. Characters are imperfect, just like in real life. Heartbreak and disappointment go hand in hand with affection and sometimes even a bit of happiness. Toss in a pinch of luck and a fistful of lust and a story is born. What does the bandleader say? One more time… WITH FEELING! Please don’t listen to the cretins and the trolls. What have they written lately?

I find only! Nice story sucker for happy endings in more ways than one!

just as good the second time around . didn't really think about the age difference .

One of the very best stories on this site... storytelling perfection!

The accents were hilarious, solid story!