by 5A4nxL32
Very sexy and erotic. I love furry women. You might like my furry stories. Cheers. Five stars!
"soon their lips were locked and eating each other out." Eating out is slang for performing oral sex on a woman. I honestly have no idea what you were aiming for with that sentence.
The dialogue doesn't feel natural. That, the misused phrases, incorrect punctuation (like question marks instead of periods), and cursory and non-descriptive sex give the feeling that the author is either not a native English speaker or has my has șex. I'm sorry to say it, but that's genuinely my impression.
Ditto to Anonymous' comment. I came here to say those exact things, beginning with the odd misuse of "eating out."