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All Comments on 'Boon of My Existence Ch. 01 of 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Just read divine bastard's so why on earth did I bother looking at this one.

5thRing5thRingalmost 7 years agoAuthor

I'm cool with people not liking the story, but if you're going to bother commenting, then please tell me what you didn't like. It's much more helpful. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

A great beginning to a story.. Let's see how it turns out...

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I love getting comments on my stories. I like honest CONSTRUCTIVE critiques: what SPECIFICALLY you liked and disliked. I'm seeking ways to improve because even I am not satisfied with my own work. Simply saying that you didn't like it is not helpful, at all. I have just su...

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