All Comments on 'Boosted Pt. 01'

Love the Sean stories!

5

You have reset the pieces for another tale. Sean first priority is to fing a very good general or just a manger with experience in the food industry. He can set pub up to be efficient and friendly. Don’t know where mystery comes in unless there a body buried in the cellar. LOL

Still good writing but not much action in this instalment, looking forward to the next chapter, 4 stars

Aaahh - now I'll have to revise my rating after the revised version posts. i was going to accuse you of fashioning a rather dull and slow first chapter, but now we'll have to wait and see. Average as submitted, expecting something better soon.

***Thanks for the start looking forward to the next submission.

Great start to the next novel