All Comments on 'Boosted Pt. 04'

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 1 month ago

Sean doesn't seem to give up easily! Something will happen and he'll be ready to pounce.

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pepepilotpepepilotabout 1 month ago

5 again and already eagerly awaiting tomorrow morning!

dgfergiedgfergieabout 1 month ago

These stories remind me of the old theaters back in the 50s, the showed a serial along with two main features. The serials were usually cliff hangers so you had to come back next weekend to see what happened! Oh, the good old days. Just waiting for the next installment. 5 stars

KeithW66KeithW66about 1 month ago

Sean is a like a dog with a bone, he has a sniff that's something wrong, but proof to stand up in court another matter

WhitewaterbumWhitewaterbumabout 1 month ago

The tension is mounting. As SH would say” the game afoot”.

LitCritLitCritabout 1 month ago

It never occurred to Sean to check the license plate numbers on the rollbacks as they arrived or departed? Or to tail the second one as it left to see if the first one was at the same destination? Or to get the license numbers of the cars as they arrived to look up on the Motor Vehicle registry to see who was coming and going? Where did Sean get his police certification - out of a Cracker Jack box? Serious omission here!

chytownchytownabout 1 month ago

*****Good read with a slow build up. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

It says it’s a 4 part series, but at the end of part 4 it’s only just getting started, not finished,

SanityCheckSanityCheckabout 1 month agoAuthor

[It says it’s a 4 part series, but at the end of part 4 it’s only just getting started, not finished,]

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It's how the site works. Each time a chapter is added to a series, the series count increases by one. It's why I post a comment on the first chapter informing readers of how many chapters there are in the series.

SanityCheckSanityCheckabout 1 month agoAuthor

[It never occurred to Sean to check the license plate numbers on the rollbacks as they arrived or departed? Or to tail the second one as it left to see if the first one was at the same destination? Or to get the license numbers of the cars as they arrived to look up on the Motor Vehicle registry to see who was coming and going? Where did Sean get his police certification - out of a Cracker Jack box? Serious omission here!]

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Thank you for your comment.

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I apologize for not making it clearer that where Sean was watching was too far from BIGS to see any details, such as plate numbers.

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