All Comments on 'Border Station Five Ch. 03'

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VioletOrchid85VioletOrchid853 months agoAuthor

This is the chapter 3 edit/rewrite.

The main difference is the sex scene at the end has been removed, and there isn’t a stupid conversation about John’s testicles. The sex scene will appear in the chapter 3-4 interlude. Enjoy.

masteraaronh74masteraaronh743 months ago

Love it, liked Vipers Nest too. Can't wait for more.

VioletOrchid85VioletOrchid853 months agoAuthor

Thanks, Border Station Five is A Viper's Nest, I'm just rewriting/editing it, posting with a different name.,

GuyfromShadesGuyfromShades2 months ago

Story is coming along nicely. Thanks for your writing.

VioletOrchid85VioletOrchid852 months agoAuthor

Glad you're enjoying it.

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I am a male author from the UK. My favourite genres are Fantasy and Science Fiction. Border Station Five is the rewrite/edit of what I have written so far of A Viper's Nest. The reading order for Border Station Five is Ch.01, Dear Diary, Ch.02. Going forward I will make su...

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