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All Comments on 'Born Again Ch. 01: The Doorway'

by SonyasFetish

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mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 9 years ago
That is quite an achievement for a first story!

I look forward to reading much more! Welcome to Literotica, SonyasFetish, and thank you for posting this very promising start to what I am certain will be a wonderful piece of work. Well done -- five stars and a favourite.

bearsladybearsladyover 9 years ago

Very well written. You have made me as curious as Natalia except my curiousity is about where this story goes.

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 9 years ago
Sonya

Don't you dare leave it here..!

You do and I will come back and haunt you.

Lovely start and let's see where we go

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Really good first chapter!

I thought she was doing to be trapped down there - waiting for whatever Mr Kane had to deliver.... .

So now looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks! x

medic181medic181over 9 years ago
Very Impressed

This story can go in a variety of directions. I am waiting with much anticipation for your next submission.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Lollygagging killed the story

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A very willing, submissive girl, I am insatiable. I wrote the first part of a story years ago and never continued it. I wish I did. It centers around bondage and non-consent, two of my favourite themes. I wish I had the time to continue it - but I will, someday. In the ...