Born from the Ashes

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Tears of the Fallen

Please notice this is a long story and there is no sexual content in this chapter. It is my first submission so any feedback and ratings are appreciated.

ENJOY

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The aroma of freshly cooked chicken filled the place, exhausted eyes flickered open. A young man tired and hungry from the strenuous effort to climb to the top of the light house, woke up. It was around sunset, the boy registered from the location of the sunrays falling on the walls of the lighthouse. He had no clocks to know the exact time, even if he had he has had never known how to check time. Staying in a lighthouse since you were big enough to read and write would do that to anyone. The Boy lifted his head from the rags he was lying on, his nostrils had registered the presence of the chicken and rice long before his eyes got a chance to see it. He rushed over to the plate where a bowl of rice and chicken curry stood waiting for him. The food was the only luxury he had two times in the day. He dug into the food like an animal and started eating feverishly. His body needed the meal, he had been working hard on the climb.

The lighthouse was old, probably 80years. The design was simple, no stairs on the inside. (the stairs seemed to have been removed in order to prevent the reach to the top of the lighthouse.). There were iron bars in the walls of the lighthouse which seemed like they were there to support a structure like stairs. But the structure seemed to be intentionally removed some long time ago. A glass window in the middle of its full height, barred with the iron grills to prevent any escape. There were claw marks on the walls up to eight feet from base of the structure. The upper part of the lighthouse had series of glass panes, and a dome like structure on the top. Couple of the glass panes were broken due to the rocks thrown up by the sea waves during the stormy nights.

The boy was 15years old, 5'7" tall: high cheekbones, sturdy jawline, broad rounded nose and lightly pink lips attributed his face to a beautiful young man. His large chocolate brown eyes were trustworthy and seemed in seek of something he was very eager to achieve; his freedom. His name was Lykan, only thing he had remembered from his childhood. He had no memory of how, why and when he was brought here. But he knew only one thing that only wish he ever made was to get out of the confines of the lighthouse. Lykan had tried to kick the door open, shout from inside for help and almost everything he could think of to get out, nothing had worked and his only hope was to climb out of that lighthouse. Twice in the day he would climb up the walls of the lighthouse using the iron bar remains in the walls of the lighthouse, he had not yet been able to reach the top but he was now close. Today, he had just made to the window that lied in the middle of the lighthouse.

'At least there is someone out there who would help me find my parents.' The boy thought looking at the forest and sea through the window.

When he was trying to hang onto the next bar, it broke in his hand and he fell down 30 feet to the ground. The drop was painful, it hurt his bare feet and knees but it was not enough to damage his will, in the morning he would try again. He slept at the same place for some time before his meal arrived.

Lykan finished his meal very quickly and pushed the empty aluminum utensils out towards the door they came from. The front door of the lighthouse was big, dark and made up of iron like everything else in the place. It was thick and had a dog door under it. The dog door was the source of the food and any luxury that the boy owned. What belonged to him was a couple of rags, a pot of water, an aluminum glass, a pair of half torn oversized shoes, two pairs of shirts and a couple worn out jeans pants. And of course, the lighthouse was his to live in. He had been there for a long time, he had not been outside of the lighthouse since as long as he could remember. He was locked in that place by someone who would provide him meals and clothes that he could wear. He would get his meals precisely at first at last light every day. A pot of water would slip in from the dog door every three days. And clothes whenever he needed them, every six months or so. It was like someone was protecting him, or was he?

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Thunder cracked in the skies sending a bolt of lightning through the dark clouds, deafening silence followed the heavy downpour. The birds hid in their nests and animals looked for shelter as the blinding darkness of new moon and storm consumed the forest lying in the valley of alps mountains. The giant, hairy wolf stood fighting off the attackers, thrashing their necks with the powerful jaws. His indigo blue fur had claw marks, he was bleeding but his majestic orange eyes showed no sign of defeat, only determination. The fierce Fenyr stood guarding the entrance to a cave. He was majestic, fiercest wolf to ever walk the earth and his every movement proved it now. He was overpowering a pack of nine wolves, he had already killed five of them including three betas.

The woman screamed in pain, she was breathing hard gasping for the much-needed air. She was lying on her back on a pile of dried grass, it was dark inside the cave and she was alone. She was going through labor and there was no one around to help. She had wounds around her legs and was dying through them. But she was determined to give birth before she took her last breath. Realization hit her and she remembered her mate Fenyr who was guarding her against the wolves. She knew they won't survive this, but they had to make sure the baby would. She took a long breath and pushed with all her might. She heard the baby cry and called for Fenyr.

Fenyr knew he had no time, Kara would be giving birth anytime and he had to be with her. He intensified his attack and pounced on alpha. Marcellus was strong and alpha of his pack but he was not strong enough to beat Fenyr. The attack was lethal and Fenyr managed to land his paws on the stomach of the black wolf. Marcellus rolled over and attacked back, but he was too slow, Fenyr caught him in the midair and snapped his neck as they landed. That was the end of alpha, but the final attack on Marcellus left Fenyr vulnerable to attack from betas, they pounced and bit him anywhere they could. Fenyr finished them with ease but caught some fatal wounds himself. He heard his name from the cave. He rushed inside and converted to his human form, he picked up his child and took him to his dying mother. She kissed him and said something to Fenyr, soon she took her last breath.

By morning Rebecca had tracked them to the cave, she found a child crying and Fenyr and Kara dead inside. On the cave wall, next to Fenyr was Written Lykan.

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Gypsy_Gypsy_about 7 years agoAuthor
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Yes, there is mygypsy as well.... And i promise next one will be longer, .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Length

You need to make your stories longer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Similar name?

Isn't there another writer by the name "Mygypsy"?

Gypsy_Gypsy_about 7 years agoAuthor
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Masterskitten

I am a big fan as well. Jaz is undoubtedly the best. It's not related to him, at all. Sorry if i hurt your feelings.

K

Masterskitten26Masterskitten26about 7 years ago
Actually didn't read it after seeing the words "Tears of the Fallen" A tittle of JazCullen's

Be very very careful what titles you use and "phrases."

Not rating due to I'm a big fan of Jaz's.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
interesting start

Can't wait to see where you go with this.

nargatoulanargatoulaabout 7 years ago
Gypsy

So Lycan is the main character but only the side characters will have sex?

That's strange but it would be interesting to read if you pull it through.

Gypsy_Gypsy_about 7 years agoAuthor
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Thanks, for comments.

Nargataula i would like to tell u that this is a long story, so have patience, you will get to know about each and every character. Second thing, not every story and every character of the story has to have sex, wait for it you will get loads of sex to enjoy. Have patience. And it's a lighthouse, made of concrete. Rest assured about the boy, he will amaze u.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Good start

Please continue.

nargatoulanargatoulaabout 7 years ago
Find an editor and other comments

I just started writing stories myself so I understand why you need the feedback. Having said that you need to know that a good editor is vital and cannot be replaced by comments which you may or not get after the story is posted. Apart from that people can get very toxic in their comments if the don't like something.

I am not a big fan of werewolf stories so I have to state this bias.

The first part of the story was interesting. The second was cliche and not needed in my opinion.

What were you trying to do with the second part?

To let us know that he was a werewolf? Since we are in the non-human part of literotica and his name was Lycan I think that everyone suspected that.

To introduce as to other characters like Rebecca or Marcellus (that dies on the first chapter)?

I would rather learn all that as the boy's story unravels.

As for the first part, my first concern is with the M.P. age. He is 15years old and I hope that you don't plan any sex scenes with him at this age. Are we going to wait for him to turn 18+?

For a person that spent so much time in prison with no contact from other humans he must have being in a very weird psychological state (Crazy or wild). I want to know about that and his feelings.

How would he be able to talk and call for help? Who taught him to speak?

You write that the door was "made up of iron like everything else in the place". What does this mean? The whole tower was made of iron or what else made from iron?

The last thing is the language. I am not native in the English language so I really struggle with this issue and an editor is really helpful.

Your language was good enough for me to read the story and understand it but I will give people more of chance with language than native speakers. I believe you need an editor to polish the language a bit.

I gave you a three stars ranking. Part of the story was interesting and you can certainly improve.

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