All Comments on 'Boss Takes My Bride'

by Miguel59

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
5 stars

Well written, enjoyable and erotic cuckold story. I am 1+1/2" flaccid and 3 +1/2" erect and have been in an almost identical situation to this husband at a party when my boss and one of my subordinates both fucked my Wife.

ju8streadingju8streadingabout 4 years ago

sorry i couldn't get past half a page.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

divorce time

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
My wife

Not very well written. But hotter than hell! My fave sequence being the wife putting her husband to bed while another man was waiting for her in another room. With both knowing exactly what was going to happen. I know I’d love nothing more than for my wife to spend the night in that room with Ricky!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

You sir, are a sad man. NEVER let another man fuck your wife. Not willingly, not ever.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
a whore is a whore is a whore

Question is, if he is supplying a whore to the boss to work there, is he a pimp or a whore besides being a cuck? 1*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
It's not even worth leaving a comment

so I just gave it its deserved 1 star and moved on.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Needs to understand the difference

Between cuckold and cuck fetish.

Why bother marry him if his dick size is so important? Would it be that Ricky wouldn't let her get away with being a slut?

Had hoped with the warning that it would NOT be cucking and his drive home was to empty the house.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
No LW day would be complete

without lots of stories for the defective cuck semi-men. Disgusting, worthless, feminized putzes.

RKreaderRKreaderabout 4 years ago
2*

What a waste of my time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

when the slut went to bed with his boss it was time to call a taxi and leave let boss man have the whore then he can take care of her and the kid if she gets pregnant grow some balls by the time she gets home the next day be packed and gone hate stupid cuck stories

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Laughably bad

And it doesn't matter that it's a "cuckold" story. What's wrong is that the characters are so unlikable and they're doing such unbelievably stupid things, the story isn't worth reading. It's just plain bad.

1 star

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Bitch Boi

Nothing would be hotter than having your wife give birth to a black baby.

Everyone would know what a bitch boi cuck you are.

26thNC26thNCabout 4 years ago
Old Mick

Old Mick is back with another of his classics. I wondered what happened to you. Didn't read the story, but welcome back.

donaldelliott11donaldelliott11about 4 years ago
Five stars

Some of my favorite cuckold stories have an element of the wife tenderly redefining her self as "Mommy", and her cuckold as her dear "little boy".

A perfect example is:

https://www.literotica.com/s/an-unwanted-affair or

https://literotica.com/s/boys-will-be-boys-ch-01

kumar_tamil21kumar_tamil21about 4 years ago
wooww but why so long no writting

i always search for your stories.. please write often

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
One of the worst writers ever.

Just posts ridicules shit.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
re: Spoiler alert. This is a story about cuckolding so don't say you weren't warned.

You put that where it can only be read AFTER opening the story. That is NOT a warning. A warning comes BEFORE opening the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
What a tramp story

I have to agree with Anonymous "when slut went to bed with his boss it was time to call a taxi and leave let boss man have the whore". Call a divorce lawyer in the morning and get on with a new life. NO job is worth having the wife sleep with the boss.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Want some papadam ?!

Brahma-Puta Bombay-Styla Banga‘aWhore Ganga‘Bang Bonga Bunga etc.

Get yo bloody elephant from da futpad yo curry guzzler and go sniffing farted cum on latrine walls in Pradh-ma-ass, but stop driveling da LIT

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Yikes

Cardboard characters and a lame plot. Truly boring. The author might do better with an openly gay story, for which he might have more passion. It could not be worse than this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Huge BBC Cuckold Fan

5 STARS !!!!! Great start to this IR cuckold tale, hope to see a 2nd chapter. Hopefully in the next chapter Prabh will be showing a baby bump.

Maybe the wife can put hubby in panties and chastity cage. Please continue with this erotic cuckold story.

AgentChanceAgentChanceabout 4 years ago
Very enjoyable

Sweet and sexy... looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Just stop

You and people like you that enjoy this drivel should just fuck off. What the fuck is wrong with you?

SeangeistSeangeistabout 4 years ago
Five Stars

Well written story, with just a few typos.

Loved the angst and how the wife took control. Lots of love was good. Husband didn’t need to have such a small cock, but I guess it’s part of the fetish. Liked that wife let him cum inside her, even if he couldn’t reach too far back.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Good writer here

But Miguel59 can't get no respect from the cuckophobe crowd. They show up to ridicule the story and some commenters, like 26thNC, take pains to claim they didn't even bother to read the text! They only showed up to take a dump on the author! Classy!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Just a pile of racist crap

No more please, no story, not a character that anyone can empathise with, just sick garbage.

ScorpioJJScorpioJJabout 4 years ago
Seriously M59

There has to be somewhere else you can post this garbage. Nothing erotic about this crap. You must be gay or bisexual to think this is ok. Just sad to think a man would find this sexy. Go back into you closet and stay out of LW.

northstanderrhinonorthstanderrhinoabout 4 years ago
Excruciatingly Bad

Not a likeable character amongst them. No real storyline, no backstory, no redeeming features whatsoever

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Love it.

Please continue with this tale!!!! I want her to be my Mommy, whether it’s in Farsi or English!!!

TonyBeetsTonyBeetsabout 4 years ago
Thank You!

Story really took off back at home. Interesting, usually wife's time with bull is the climax. Domination after the fact in this story was powerful, very well told!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

I want to be Bradley so bad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
And this is a story?

Sorry, and he didn't know to expect this before the party? Come on. what the know? This is pure adultery, and I am amazed at Bradley's response. She was a slut, and treated him so poorly. Where is the back story of this>

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
thanks for the warning-

if most authors were like you i may have not made the decision to avoid this website as of the start of the month-my beliefs are entirely my own and i wouldnt troll someone with your foresight

iameaseliameaselalmost 3 years ago

Im still laughing my ass off at this mess.

mletroutmletroutalmost 3 years ago

I kinda liked it, but I think I would have left the wife, the job, and the marriage halfway through the party. But I guess that’s why nobody is writing any stories about me. In all seriousness though, if my husband ever told me to change the sheets after cheating on me with my boss, he would need a prosthetic penis. I mean, I love the man, but there are limits…which brings me back to the party, actually. Hmmm…never mind.

Legio_Patria_NostraLegio_Patria_Nostraalmost 3 years ago

Rewrite the story without the stupid clichés. These are like porno flick dialogue. Is there a cuckold manual that says, "Your dick cannot be over 3-4 inches..."? There's a psychological aspect here, low self-esteem meets crazy female, that lends itself to all kinds of drama and interaction, but 99% of these writers follow the Literotica Cuckold Style Manual (Rev. 21: Mar. 2021) instead. 1/5.

BeauReadyBeauReadyalmost 3 years ago
Insulting!

Pure drivel; relying on the most tired and over-used cliches - the husband's tiny penis; the necessity for humiliation (bullshit garbage) and the failure to even allude to let alone explain the most obvious discordance: if hubby is so physically tiny and psychologically a wimp loser, while wifey can easily and readily attract, seduce and ensnare the most physically, emotionally and financially perfect and adept men, why on earth would wifey continue living with a flacid eunuch with no prospect of financial success and a 3-inch penis?!?!? Any and every woman in the world - no matter how much she "loves" her hubby - would immediately dump his sorry ass the second she realizes what a loser he is and who she could spin-off to with greater accomplishments and prospects, wealth, physicality!

PURE, WORTHLESS CRAP!

Find something else to do with your life - like playing russian roulette.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good story in the cuck genre. Well written. Need more development

eljj546eljj546about 2 years ago
Another stupid dickless writer

Writing about another stupid ball less Wonder

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

At one time, people like this couple were placed in an institution until cured of their deviant nature. Now, they make it a game of breeding with his boss. Seriously, the sequel should be about the lawsuit Brad files over his boss seducing and openly breeding his wife, thus creating the ultimate workplace harassment and hostile work environment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I'm sorry, I normally try to find some redeeming feature in an effort. Where do these useless men come from, I spent 90 days in jail after i found my wife with another man and i was fine with that. Her lover got two broken knees and one broken shoulder blade from the beating he got. I never hit her but thought about it. She expected to stay married, she was wrong. as soon as I got out of the jail after refusing bail, i took my half of the bank accounts and left the house. I am happy now; I hope she is too but don't really care

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is what happens when you feed little boys soy formula for 40 years.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

My wife found this story and we both enjoyed it tremendously. Her eyes always light up when she finds a story about a older, powerful boss and an employee’s young, beautiful wife.

My wife especially likes stories where several people help the cuckolding to take place. In your story Don, and Jean especially, were enablers who helped set it up. It’s so deliciously nasty when the husband is the last to know what is on the plate, i.e., his wife, for that particular evening!

Following are some highlights that we really enjoyed from your story:

*Brad’s kissing her crotch right before she went to fuck the boss was hot. I also kissed my wife’s ‘camel toe’ just before she gave her pussy to my boss. All husbands should do that, it’s like giving her your blessing.

*Brad’s sleeping on the couch, and hearing the lovemaking in the guest room was erotic. He jacked off until he was out of ‘babymakers’, heh, heh, hed! That is exactly what a husband should be doing while his wife is being satisfied by a better man. It was super hot that Jean found all his used Kleenex the next morning!

*Prabh had insisted that she and Brad use condoms which was in stark contrast to her going bareback with the black boss. I have never had my wife bareback; however, dozens of other men have – especially my bosses! In marriage preparation classes they should explain to young couples that this is how it is done!

*You wrote, “I fell asleep hoping Richard had gotten my bride pregnant. One look at the baby and everyone would know she had betrayed me. I didn't have a drop of African blood in me and that baby would be half.”

Extramarital conception is really hot. All three of our children were sired by different bosses of mine. My wife wishes one of them had been black! Most white, married couples should have the wife breed black!

*Prabh said to Jean and Bradley, "Bradley, I do have something for you to do. Go take the sheets off the bed and put them by the washing machine."

My wife always has me undress her and handwash her silk stocking, garter belt, panties, and ½-cup bra when she comes home from a date.

Of course, I suck all the man’s sperm out of her panties and imagine how much is still left in her fertile, unprotected womb.

Having Bradley strip the wet sheets off the bed was exactly the right thing to have him do!

*“She smiled, "You've fallen deeper in love with me, haven't you?"

I said, "I think I have."

She answered, "I know you have. I can see it in your eyes."

This is natural and my love for my wife is much more intense now that I’m a cuckold. The only happy marriages we know of are where the wife is getting her brains fucked out by a big-cocked lover.

Marriage counselors should insist is couples’ counseling that the wives take lovers! A wife’s level of neurosis drops by about 90% when she is spreading her legs for other men!

*"Do you want him to get you pregnant?"

"I wouldn't mind…but I wanted to mate with him. He just seems superior, not just to you, but to all the other men I've dated." "Just think what our child would be like. Athletic, tall, quick, strong, intelligent, handsome."

This is the real reason why wives prefer to be bred by other, Alpha males. Every wife wants what is best for her own children. And most times that is better chromosomes being pumped into her young fertile womb!

My wife says, “My goodness, why don’t other wives wise up and go for the strongest breeder! That ought to be a law!”

* "Since he became a cuckold, Don has the same obsession."

"With sperm?"

"Yes, especially after she's been with another man."

My wife has been feeding me other men’s sperm for many years, usually by face-sitting me. I’m not gay, except for my need to eat their sperm!

We hope you will write another chapter or three. It seems both Phrab and Brad both want the boss to breed her! After the first time my wife cuckolded me, she took me right in for a vasectomy.

She says that 90% of all husbands should be sterilized so, the wives can ‘breed up’! That also should be the law and it could be taught to both boys and girls in school sex education classes.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

find a shrink you need one. nothing redeemed this trash..

4bk554bk5510 months ago

BULLSHIT….GET YOUR HEAD OUT OF YOUR ASS

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

That's the exact way I'd love to be cucked. I would of needed several tissues as well listening to my wife get fucked by a real cock not my tiny penis. I was born to be a cuckold.

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