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by maverick_kelzar

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
good story

A sequel would be nice, with her getting DPed - pussy and ass at same time, plus ass to mouth. If she would do double anal that would be great. Also, the guys should come inside her, not on her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Word use.

Just for fun, go back through your story and count the number of times you used "sneered" It became distracting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Solid Story

I don't give a shit how many times you used the word sneered. One of the better stories I've read in some time. I know a girl behind the counter always excites me at the hardware store.

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Maverick is an Australian Erotic Short Story author with all content available on his website, maverickkelzar.com. Here, you can join the newsletter, contact Maverick and read stories for free and purchase via KDP. Updated every few days, new content is never far away!