All Comments on 'Both Go Bi'

...the writing left a lot to be desired. It felt like a play-by-play recounting, instead of a story.

You have a great story here. Hopefully you will continue it as a series of their stops on the trip.

You have a few problems with typos and/or grammar. The word : "their" refers to possession and the word "there" refers to a place.

more please!!!!!

A bad writer destroys interesting stories.

As per the previous reviewer, more, more, more.

I liked the story ...

though it was bit fast paced and that you seems to be lest sensual than i expected but over all good story ...

looking for the sequence

It was a fair story. I would love to have my wife do this with another couple. Imagine watching my wife with another man and a woman and sharing cum WOW.

loved your story, absolutely fantastic!

Please post more, this was so incredibly hot...would luv to read more adventures.

Not one reaction of revulsion, to savoring a hard dick that just came from an asshole. Folks, you are revealing that anal sex is fantasy-land for you. Please don't actually try this.

Fun, hot story.

And despite what Anon Y. Mouse says, if someone is excited enough, sucking a dick straight out of an asshole, or even sucking that wide open asshole itself, can be an enjoyable erotic adventure.