All Comments on 'Bottom-Slayer: 1st Bottom Slain'

Writing was ok, just didn't care for the story. I guess I'm more of a HEA (for both people) kind of reader.

Ned a new bitch ??

can't wait for part 2 about the dad and the brother........good work

Amazing, loved this so much.

Thanks you wrote out what was in my head. Now, secret is out!

Great story.

PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE, loved it

Wonderful, erotic mind provoking story! I Love ir read it over and over, more please

very hot story would love to hear more ,like you i love humiliation and very much so between two women im one of your biggest fans , please keep writing

i would love to hear from others that are turned on by being humiliated its such a hot topic

a very good story..you know how take us in the action and suspense..the second part seems can be hot with brother and dad..hope read you soon thanks

Add in regular ass whippings with a belt & i'm the prep

back up cocksucker for a bull stud? Check

blackmail pics? Check

promise not to tell? Check & of course a big lie every cockucker

gets "told" on

can't wait for more bottom slaying

This is the best god damn story I have ever read. I have had a fantasy of being made to sit and pee and be ablack man prison bitch forever.. I am a 5'3" 130lb cute whiteboy and ...I loved your story .. I crossdress am cute and take REAL black cock... PLEASE KEEP IT UP

As you already figured, I loved your stories and hope to see more of them soon.

This is one of my favorites from you; I keep rereading it because it's so hot! I wonder whose his second bottom.

I have loved your stories in the TS section of Literotica and this is just as excellent. I love how you used the interracial trope as well, it added a lot of heat to an already incredibly engaging and sexy piece.

I don't know if you plan on writing more adventures of the "bottom slayer" but I'd be eager to read them if you do.

i would enjoy reading the sequel to this about karens family.

I'd like to be Erica!!!

I LUVED ur story... Id Luv bein one of ur faggot s .. It seems all I can think about is the Sight, Taste , Feel & Smell of a Big Fat Heavy Blk Cock slappin my faggot face as Im on my knees beggin trying to catch it & Suck IT ,with my hands tied behind my back...Soooo when U do let the faggot have it U can Fuck my faggot Cunt Throat.. & I mean fuck it Balls Deep Plz Master ... & Ur lil wht cocksuckin faggot LUVS boipussy to throat .... I can NOT GET Enough cummmmmmm to swallow

I would love to see a sequel where he shoved hid nice big cock into another twink white boy, maybe a college setting?

This story is hot as hell!!!

I'd like to see that "other story" about Karen's college brother and her old school dad. More gay and incest stories from you period. ;3

i love your story because i love the girly submissive fagboi scenario. i love when a cute black stud forces me to be his feminine cum dump. When I'm dressed I really look girly. my recent guy treated me with love and passion and made me totally feel like his girlfriend. i loved him and would do anything he asked.

take it, own it, use it....on yahoo im as luvsexybrownskin...

Love it! I want to be eric(a).

need a Jim or Bubba with a BBC to make me hiss faggot cum slut

jamie in phx

oh fucking YES ... i don't know whom to be more jealous of ... the hot black fuck stud who is getting his jet black fuck stick sucked off, or the hot white twink boy who is down on his knees with his lips wrapped around that gorgeous black fuck meat and wearing that hot sticky goo all over his face ... yummmmm (sam)

Love how Eric became Erica. The name change reflects Eric's true sexual nature, a cum dump for BBC. Be great to read how Karen's father is 'turned'.

Reads like the guy who wrote this is the "faggot". He seems much more interested in men than in women.

Whenever things were not the way he liked he shouted and screamed at us workers. For the first time in my life someone's shouting affected me the way it did: i felt something like a mild electric jolt im my ass which was pulsating. It was more than just fear. Health & safety regulation required that no less then 2 persons must be in the warehouse at all times. He offered me extra hours which i did need but perhaps a part of my psyche i hetherto was not aware of wanted to be near him.

Basically him & me were alone at the place for 3 hours 3 times a week.

At a point he said to me, "You kind of freeze when i start shouting, are you afraid of me... don't be, you are my friend, before i would fire you i would offer you a spanking as a plea bargain... which one would you choose?"

To cut the long story short i did suck his dick & he did fuck me up my ass.

Unlike Jim, once my boss established his domination, he was rather gentle with me.

His cock was rock hard and would stay that way for a long time. During anal intercourse i would come without even touching my dick.

Our affair stopped when the company offered him a position in a different part of the country.

But I'm not sure how realistic it is in real life.

I've seen a few black cocks over the years that made me think about sucking one but I never took that step. I've also seen a few white cocks that made me think about sucking one too, but again, I never took that step.

Maybe one day I'll see one that will make me step over that line.

Reading hot stories like this does make me think about it a lot more.

love to be his faggot pussy and cum toy, be abused by his BBC. cause my first black cock was my trigger to loving and obeying my masters they filled my holes, deepthroated me banged my ass hard and long,i never complain to scared of losing the wonderful pleasures those BBCs are giving me and my masters dominations

Still hoping you'll revisit this character and create a sequel.. or more.

Very good start I would definitely like to read more on how much this boy gets used and more including out side used would be great !

Am a Straight? Guy that has switch hit a few times and really, really liked it, but it would have been even better if I had been treated as a submissive and called a few sissy names. My last one(10 yrs. ago) was black. Did him 3 or 4 times and he still calls me but neither can host. He was too big to go into my throat but I did love the feel of It and got off watching in the mirror as it slid in and out of my mouth. Prior to that I was doing an older white guy a few times and once, after he finished in my mouth he led me to his 2nd bedroom where a friend of his was waiting. I did him also.

It's hard to explain, but there are some men who, with just one look at me, do just know how willing I am to serve them. It's only happened twice, but both times I dropped to my knees on command and sucked a complete stranger off. The only way I can manage my pervertion to beat off to stories like this one. Thank-you for providing a safe outlet.

I had been Sucking white cocks, with the occasional Fucking for a few years when my first chance to take Black Cocks arrived. My sleep was disturbed, so I went for a walk and JUST HAPPENED to go to a well known Dogging layby near Teesside in the UK. I was walking about playing with my small cockette when a car window went down and a voice said "You suck cock white boy?" I reached in and fondled a BIG cock, "sure!" I said. There were four black guys in the car and I was dragged into the back and had a LARGE cock stuffed into my throat, as the car started to move. I was taken to a flat and was frankly (if fairly willingly) RAPED, as their sexual entertainment, Sucking and being Fucked well into the next afternoon (they let me call in a sicky to work) They offered me a (blindfolded) return to the layby, or to become one of their regular white pussybois? surprise, they fucked me in and out of fem clothing til I moved for my job. I still take white cocks, but if there is a choice, it's BLACK COCK for me. Pussyboi A man da

Very good looking white guy hear wishing that was me sucking big black cock and taking it up my ass for the first time

I can't wait to see this one evolve with the next installment!

I have had the pleasure of being used several times by a massive black cock. There is just something nice about having a massive load blown deep into your tight ass.

When it happens to me, I drip for several days. I love it.

Loved the beginning of the story where the black guy brags about how many white men and women he has fucked. Would like to see more stories from a black man's perspective of fucking married straight men in the mouth and ass, and fucking their wives too. Loved the facial cumshot scene where the black guy takes a photo of Eric's cum covered face, and then explains how that is now a tradition for him. I liked how you made Eric the class president and future congressman; the more "respectable" the white bottom, the greater the degradation of being fucked by blacks and the hotter it makes me. The wig and the dressing in women's clothes does't do anything for me - don't have anything against it, just not my thing.

I loved the story, the whole time I was reading I was picturing myself as the straight white cocksucker on my knees worshipping his big black cock with my hungry.mouth. I hope you will continue with more stories along this topic.

Being the bottom size queen faggot that I am there is very little that gets me going more than a hung black cock. I do love this quicky story.

I wish I was fucked like this in High School, now my girlfriend does me with a strap on, but the real thing would be great. Who doesn't like chocolate?

My name is also Eric and I love to suck and be fucked by Big Black Cocks.

I do wish I had my first Big Black Cock as young as the Eric in the story.

I once dominated an older submissive guy called Eric for a few weeks and he confided that he’d submitted to a teenage black guy for a while. He claimed to have acquired a passion for black dominance from that experience, so maybe this is something that is more widespread than we think.

Good little story, well done!

Jim’s pretty gay

Sorry, I am not a fan of queer stories.

A confident self-assured man like Jim has always intimidated me. My first time sucking cock was similar. I didn't want to do it. It happened anyway. I wasn't so eager to do it again, like Eric in this story. Over time, I admit I began to like doing it. I didn't like being called a faggot though, even though it became true. To me, it's such a demeaning word.

Jim referring to Eric as Erica and princess, and "Good Girl," is so HOT! I'd be a little scared if a guy like Jim decided to make ME his next conquest! It's been a long time since I've been with a man and I miss the attention. I miss being needed. Even if it's to be a man's cocksucker and bottom.

Reminds me of my prison daddy. Out and married wish it was me.