All Comments on 'Boudoir Babe'

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Ailsa_CraigAilsa_Craig7 months ago

I loved this! It could have been so very cliched but turned out to be splendidly original in every way.

MigbirdMigbird7 months ago

True, the boudoir setting not original (not much is under …); it’s what you did with your characters and the action that made this piece enjoyable. Olivia is believable — you provide just enough background to tease; I’d love to know what happened/how she lost her self-esteem/her mojo to borrow a term. The sex builds nicely in tumescent way. Last line provides some hope you will develop this relationship/share more of their history.

jth215-2jth215-27 months ago

What a shoot. Just loved it. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

You’re amazing 🍯

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