by howmany_harmony
I loved this! It could have been so very cliched but turned out to be splendidly original in every way.
True, the boudoir setting not original (not much is under …); it’s what you did with your characters and the action that made this piece enjoyable. Olivia is believable — you provide just enough background to tease; I’d love to know what happened/how she lost her self-esteem/her mojo to borrow a term. The sex builds nicely in tumescent way. Last line provides some hope you will develop this relationship/share more of their history.