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Click here"I wasn't expecting you" she mumbles.
"I wasn't expecting you either" I whisper back. Continuing, I raise my voice to a more normal volume "I would like to see you again, outside of here. I would like to go on a date, and get to know you, and see if there's more here, because I'm not ready for this to end."
"I would like that a lot." she smiles into her words and leans in for a chaste kiss.
"But I'd also like to come back here, and maybe use that swing and that cross" I whisper into her ear before laying back and smirking at her.
"I think that can be arranged" she smiles back.
True, the boudoir setting not original (not much is under …); it’s what you did with your characters and the action that made this piece enjoyable. Olivia is believable — you provide just enough background to tease; I’d love to know what happened/how she lost her self-esteem/her mojo to borrow a term. The sex builds nicely in tumescent way. Last line provides some hope you will develop this relationship/share more of their history.
I loved this! It could have been so very cliched but turned out to be splendidly original in every way.