All Comments on 'Boudoir Photography'

Very well done story, with nice background and build up. I look forward to reading more from you.

No legitimate studio would ever use a form like that.

Seems to me that Moira and Rich planned this all along.

My main criticism would be the way that every time Sammi has sex, it takes place off-stage or she's interrupted. For a sexual memoir, there's not a lot of actual sex.

Great flow and build to the sexual tension. Very arousing.

Also left with a great cliffhanger ending, place for further adventures....

Really good story.

The fucking vice squad? It's a story not a tour guide, lighten up and have the guts to leave your name, cretin.

Well done Sammi. This was a hot and horny story with several twists to make it very intriguing. Ill search your other submissions to see whether it was a private party.........or not.

M xx

A good erotic tale has to be believable, and the reader wants to be there, part of action!

You tick all the boxes!

Well done, another great story, very well told.

It's so much better when you tell the stories in the first person, it gives a more realistic feel to the narrative.

As long as you keep writing I'll keep reading. A well told story can be even more erotic than pictures or videos.