by LurksForFun
Don't listen to the anonymous person claiming that you didn't put enough sex in your story. You did just fine with Mark going down on Carmen. More story with just a small amount of sex is the perfect recipe. Anonymous was probably just mad because he couldn't bust his nut to this chapter.
And not only that, but like I always say: Anonymous users who post negative comments are not relevant. 🙄 If you have to hide your true identity, then you yourself know that your comments are bullshit.
I actually enjoyed this chapter better than the last two, so I'll raise up my vote to 4/5 this time.